Just recently, I got the rights back to one of my books, titled Stray Ally. It did okay in sales, pretty well a few times, and came out in print from a digital publisher. People liked it. There were good reviews on Amazon, and I thought it was a pretty good book overall.
The editor I worked with was thorough and professional. The story idea itself was pretty solid. The publisher I worked with had (and has) a good reputation. The cover was pretty amazing, and professionally designed. A lot of people liked that too. Actually, I still like the old cover.
I thought it would be an easy turnaround. I thought I would simply do a quick brush re-edit and release it with the original cover under my own publisher and brand. Nope. Wrong answer.
Okay, the story was not bad. Let’s get that out of the way first off. Second, I usually don’t read my books once they are written and published. It’s not that I don’t like them, but I am my own worst critic, as I am sure you are your own. So I could spend my life re-writing those first books, or I can move on and write more and better ones.
But in this case, I had to look. And there were issues. I’ve learned things about story and story structure since then, and I left some important elements out of the story. Enough elements that I was not content to just “put it out there again.”
So I did some re-writing and editing. And the story is better now, one I can live with.
I’ve worked as an editor, and I know for a fact that I have gotten better over time. I catch mistakes I never did before, even when it comes to plot, pacing, and story. I’m sure my editor at the time, who is still editing, has gotten better. But there are some things in the old version that I could just not let go.
So I fixed those too. Hopefully, I caught them all, and those who read the book after that caught more. I hope it’s perfect now, and I know it is not.
Old cover: great. But new story elements, new editing, all those things told me a new cover was the answer. So I talked to my current designer, and I can tell you that Elle at Evernight Designs knocked it out of the park. The new cover is amazing, and it fits right in with the fact that I have always wanted to turn this book into a series. She also did the cover for Harvested, and many of my other books.
That—well, that is another part of the story.
My Part in All This
Okay, so for a few years I had some personal issues, ones I won’t go into here. So a part of what happened is that I stopped promoting my work in large part, and actually (gasp) took a day job for a while.
The second was that I stopped writing fiction nearly as much. That means the second book in that series—well, it languished. But not anymore. I came out of the other side of that dark passage swinging, writing like crazy. And that meant my muse went: “What about book #2 in that series?”
What about it? The Good Shepherd has had stops, starts, and restarts. But now it is back in the writing mix and ready to be finished. The Dog Complex series is revived.
On September 30, Stray Ally will be revived. You can find it at your favorite e-book seller, and hopefully in print a whole bunch of places too. In fact, you can go to your local bookstore and request that they carry it, or order it for you if you like, or you can order it directly from this website once it is out.
Your own works, five years later? If you are a writer, you might see just how far you have come. For you, the readers? This is probably the best Stray Ally will ever get. But there are more stories coming. I can promise you that.
For many of the state capitals we will write about, I have a confession to make. I haven’t spent a lot of time there. But that’s an exception when it comes to Sacramento.
Due to another writing assignment (I also work as a freelancer) I have been traveling to that area frequently since last spring. What that means is I have been able to go to the Capitol Building, take photos like what I have imagined Nick might take, and roam around the city.
I’ve eaten at a few of the places in the book, been to some of the bars, and actually intend to go back again to visit more of the museums and spend a little more “pleasure” time there rather than “work” time.
But there are some things I can tell you (and show you) thanks to photos, about the capital itself, the park surrounding it, and the city of Sacramento.
The Capitol Building
The Capitol Building, much like others in the Unites States, has a design based on the United States Capitol building in Washington D.C. The current building was constructed between 1861-1874. Two earthquakes, pretty uncommon in the Sacramento area, struck within two days of each other in 1892, and the capital was quickly repaired.
It was listed on the National Registry of Historic places in 1973, and a renovation project started in 1974 and ended in 1982, an effort to restore the beauty of the capitol and to make it more earthquake safe.
The chamber rooms where the assembly and senate meet are located at opposite ends of the building. The Senate chamber is modeled after the British House of Lords, or the upper house. The Assembly chambers are based on the British House of Commons, or the lower house.
There are ornate statues, gorgeous floors, and an integrated museum detailing the history of both the Capitol building and the state of California.
There is a park that surrounds the Capital building, 10 undivided city blocks from 10thto 16th, and from L to N streets. There are a lot of interpretive signs, benches and other places to site, sidewalks and walkways. Walking up to the capitol building through the park gives you a great sense of the building and its history.
Like many other downtown areas, parking is at a premium, but you can find spots along the edge of the park and some surrounding streets, although that is hampered somewhat by construction at the moment.
There is an app like those used in other cities that allows you to pay for and renew parking even if you are not near your car, a good way to save yourself from having to carry change around. Just remember if you are in a rental car to get the plate right, especially if you have other vehicles in the app. Parking enforcement is strict and swift.
Old Town Sacramento
Much of the old town Sacramento historic district was built in the mid-1800’s. There are museums, shops, restaurants, and a great waterfront area along the river. There are wooden sidewalks, restored old buildings and many other attractions in this 28-acre state park that is also a part of the National Register of Historic Places.
There are horse drawn carriages and often living history characters from the Gold Rush era of California’s history.
The Homeless Issue
So you don’t have to drive long through Sacramento, along highway 99 or along the waterfront to see that the city has a homeless problem. There are tent cities and trash in many places.
This is in part due to the climate: even with the hot summers, the sunshine in California is more desirable than the winters further north. It is also in part due to the cost of housing and other factors, but the city and other organizations are looking to make changes that will help. San Diego has developed some very similar tactics, and Sacramento is trying to follow their lead.
Want to help? Here is a link to one of the primary resources for those who are homeless in Sacramento. They can also help you by letting you know the needs of many organizations, should you wish to donate money, your time, or some of both. https://www.shra.org/emergency-housing-and-other-homeless-resources/
I’ve enjoyed getting to know Sacramento and the surrounding area. There are great people, fantastic attractions, and hopefully, no real spree of strangulations.
Want to read our mystery set in Sacramento? Click on this link to see the books in our series so far, and to order the book from our website or your favorite online retailer.
The Oregon State Hospital, a mental institution in Salem, Oregon and featured in our book, Slaying in Salem, has a dark history. There are stories of abuse, but not just of mentally ill adults. There are stories of children, housed there because they had no other place to go, and under terrible conditions.
One of the worst parts of the story involves the “Library of Dust” or the “Room of Forgotten Souls.” Both refer to a room discovered through an investigation of the institution by The Oregonian. The room contained over 300 copper urns containing the ashes of unclaimed residents who had passed away there. But there was more. Some of those who were buried in a nearby cemetery were moved, and their grave markers removed and discarded.
The abuse of both the living and the dead sparked outrage in the legislature, and the Oregon government began the demolition of some buildings, the renovation of others, and the creation of an entirely new hospital.
The atrocities are not forgotten though. A part of the hospital is now a museum, dedicated to showing the history of the building and the issues with the care for the mentally ill in Oregon and beyond. It highlights a problem:
- There are more mentally ill patients in jails than in institutions nationwide.
- The institutions are often very jail like, even maintained by the state Departments of Correction, and offer little in the way of actual treatment.
- Funding for public mental health has been slashed again and again and again, both at Federal and state levels.
Often, a jail sentence either makes a mental illness worse, or it causes one in someone who previously was not ill. Sometimes, mental illness directly or indirectly caused the offense the prisoner is locked up for.
It isn’t right. We have two choices. Either we as people can step up to encourage our government to increase funding for public health, or we can take care of it on a private basis.
Either way, something needs to be done, and what happened at the Oregon State Hospital is just one illustration of what can be done when the public takes action.
What happens in Slaying in Salem is tragic. But what happened in real life, the back story? That is much more tragic.
Read more and see photos on the Capital City Murders blog.
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Have you ever heard that the truth is stranger than fiction? That is often the case. We can’t even use some of the best true crime cases to model our fiction stories after. Why? No one would believe things happened that way.
However, there are facts behind the fiction we write. When we talk about guns and shooting them, we need to be accurate. Because readers, at least some of them, know how these things work. We must also be careful with things like how people die, what they look like, and how we find the clues and solve the mysteries we create.
Did you ever wonder about some of the research, and why your favorite thriller and mystery author is being watched by the government? This blog will explore some of those themes and ideas.
The Police and Law Enforcement
Even though sometimes it might not seem like it in real life or on TV dramas, the police and law enforcement officers have rules they need to follow. Most of the time, they do follow those rules. The exceptions are rare. Those exceptions make TV and fiction fun to read, but they are not really consistent with how the real world works.
That is why we, as authors, are careful about what we put in our books and what we say. We want to respect those who protect us, and we want you to understand that they are people just like you and me. Most of them are honest and good at what they do. Like any other profession, there are bad examples though.
For the sake of fiction, we often process evidence quickly. But it doesn’t happen that way in real life. Most smaller cities do not have a forensics department and often have to wait for help. DNA labs are extremely busy and backed up, and if the person’s DNA is not on file, police have to wait until they can match it to a potential suspect. To do that, they need enough evidence for a warrant to collect it.
It’s all rather challenging, and now juries, thanks to fiction, expect this kind of concrete evidence in most cases. It is problematic for both police and attorneys. When we try to be more realistic in fiction, it often makes our books seem slow or dull. So we have to bend the rules just a little.
We’ll talk more about this stuff in upcoming posts, at least once a week, where we deal with the reality behind fiction.
Murder, Serial Killers, and More
Crime is rare, kinda. And violent crime even more so. But many murders every year go unsolved. Want to know why? There are actually a whole host of reasons, and soon we will talk about some of them here, some related to today’s headlines, others related to cases in the past. You won’t believe some of what you will read.
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